Dissecting an argument
Just as the argument as a whole has a structure so does each stage. Therefore:
Each issue needs an entry.
But to get to the entry you
need to pass through a corridor. You need a sentence which tells the reader that he
or she is going from one situation into another. “Corridor sentences” are
essential to the understanding. For
example: The two sentences in italics surrounding this paragraph are simple
examples of what I mean. Corridor sentences make a reader aware of the
connection between two subjects. Let’s go
back to describing the entry or introduction to any issue.
An example of an entry- or introductory sentence
might be a statement of the problem, a description of the situation as it is,
the giving of relevant statistics, the quoting of an authority on the subject
or the establishing of your point of view.
You then have to explain why you want the reader to
understand this part of the problem by explaining its relevance to the whole
argument.
A proposition needs to be supported by evidence.
Evidence is the furniture of a point of view, just as a room always proposes an
activity by the way it looks. The evidence you bring to bear on the argument
must support your point of view. If it does not, get rid of the point of view
or find compelling evidence.
Illustrations are a form of evidence. Illustrations
can be used as independent visual statements, that is, as self-illustrating
arguments or provocations. When you use illustrations without comment they can
form a useful back up to the essay. That way they can help set the mood of an
essay. That is part of the rhetoric of
Illustrations, which means not just what
a picture shows, but also the way it
shows it.
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I shall discuss this possibility a little further on when we get to the
manifesto, which is specifically concerned with the relationship between words
and images. But usually Illustrations need to be supplemented by a description
of their relevant features as well as an outright explanation of their
relevance to the argument.
Of course Illustrations are not always of the
visible kind: anecdotes can be used as very appropriate illustrations and
evidence. Anecdotes are short stories that recount an event or a particular
situation to become evidence of a particular interpretation and point of view.
The same is true for statistical information and sociological evidence.
Make sure that the picture, diagram, graph,
statistic or anecdote you use, helps the argument as effectively as possible.
The questions you have to ask yourself are:
·
What
is it about the picture, anecdote, statistic, which helps me to show what I am
trying to say?
·
Would
it help the reader understand if I describe what is relevant about this evidence?
·
Have
I explained the relevance and purpose of my illustration in my text?
·
Remember:
illustrations can make a text more desirable, use them often but only when they
help your argument or story.
Every argument inevitably throws up many possible
threads to follow. Every proposition has a wide range of implications for all
sorts of other topics. There are two things you need to do:
·
You
need to keep to your purpose as defined by the focus of your topic.
·
Discuss
any wider implications in footnotes or appendices.
When you want to leave a particular proposition or
issue to go to the next, you will need to explain why you want to leave, and
where you want to go and why you want to go there.
Although the exact order is not carved in stone, an
argument necessarily consists of “a problem” in the form of a question leading
to “a proposition” to answer that question, “an explanation” telling us why it
is a good proposition and then a reaction to that proposition which will
prepare the ground for the next proposition or argument. That is the process
whereby you seek out the implications of your argument.
What are implications? Implications are things which
have not been stated but which are
contained in what has been stated. We will deal with this now that we have
reached The Conclusion.
[1] The art or study of using language effectively and persuasively. b. A treatise or book discussing this art. 2. Skill in using language effectively and persuasively. 3.a. A style of speaking or writing, especially the language of a particular subject: fiery political rhetoric. b. Language that is elaborate, pretentious, insincere, or intellectually vacuous: His offers of compromise were mere rhetoric. 4.Verbal communication; discourse. Quoted from Bookshelf 98, CDROM.